requested changes and then enclose exactly the same script.â
âI canât.â
âTry it.â
âTheyâll notice.â
âThey wonât.â
And he had been right; the untouched version of draft five had passed from associate producer to script editor, from ideas conference to Home Security Propaganda Department Committee, subdivision 4/b (films) and it had been universally accepted as an officially-approved final draft. And here, now, were Mr and Mrs Brown, very nearly as she had imagined them (if a little too old), sitting together in the comfortably worn surroundings of their front room, a vision of suburban domestic harmony.
âLetâs have some quiet,â called Briggs. âGoing for a take.â
âOne moment.â Ambrose was packing shag into the pipe bowl with his thumb.
âDarling, youâre not really going to, are you?â asked Cecy.
âWhatâs that?â
âYouâre not going to smoke that filthy thing, are you?â
âI was going to, yes. I feel itâs appropriate to the character. If someone as irrelevant as myself is allowed to have any opinions whatsoever about such an issue,â he added, glancing at the director.
âCouldnât you just mime?â said Cecy.
âI can mime smoking but I canât mime smoke.â
âI suppose not. Itâs just that my chest isnât what it was.â
âIâm using a bronchial brand.â
âBesides, I always thought it was a continuity problem.â
âIn what way?â
âWell, in the way that great puffs of smoke keep popping up at odd times.â
âYou may possibly be thinking of actors who donât understand the concept of continuity, as opposed to actors who possess an innate technical awareness.â
âIâm sorry, darling, I didnât mean to . . .â
âExcuse me, Mr Hilliard.â It was Briggs, bending deferentially over the armchair. âThe director says that heâd prefer if you didnât have the pipe.â
âOh, does he? May I ask why?â
âHe feels it may distract the audience from the dialogue.â
âOh, how ridiculous .â
âNo, Ambrose, I think he has a point,â said Cecy, jerking her needles for emphasis and knocking the ball of wool on to the floor. She reached out a hand, waggled it ineffectually in the general direction of the wool, and then looked around for help. âCould someone . . . so sorry to be a trouble.â
âEveryone happy?â called Briggs to the floor.
âPerhaps I should read my dialogue from another room,â said Ambrose, putting the pipe away. âI wouldnât want to distract the audience with my presence.â
âSettle down, everybody. Going for a take on The Letter , first set up. Quiet please.â Briggs glanced over to the camera, where the clapper boy was standing, board in hand. âRolling?â
âRolling.â
âSpeed?â
âSpeed.â
âSound?â
âYup.â
The clapper snapped shut.
âAnd action .â
Mrs Brown clicked her needles for a moment or two, and then looked up with a wifely smile.
â I had a letter from April today ,â she said. â A nice four-pager .â
â Whatâs she on about this time? â asked Ambrose. The camera was behind him, shooting part of the back of his head and the whole of Cecyâs face. She had angled herself towards the lights, as a sunflower swivels towards the sun.
â She says she and Tony have made up ever such a clever code so that he can write to her about what heâs doing without anyone being able to guess .â
â Oh yes? â Of course, one always continued acting even if oneâs own face wasnât in shot, it was simple professional courtesy, but since Cecy was barely bothering to glance at him between phrases, he allowed his eyes to
Alan Brooke, David Brandon