sun-kissed nose, last weekâs burn beginning to flake from her chest. Heâs disturbed to think she might remind him a little of his baby sister.
He flattens his part again and grabs her hand, turning it palm up. Pressing a point on her wrist, he tells her that heâs heard that if he keeps pressing sheâll go limp in just thirty seconds. She freezes, holding his gaze. Her knees start to buckle at the twenty-second mark. Heâs not even doing anything, he thinks. But as the girl crumples to the sand, he drops her arm and pushes his hands into his pockets, looking to see if theyâve been spotted. Itâs just a mind trick, he says to himself. Heâs done nothing wrong.
READER
Caucasian female, early 20s, with short brown hair and hoop earrings, wearing long, dark overcoat and green scarf, book bag slung over shoulder.
The Bell Jar
Sylvia Plath
(Faber and Faber, 1966)
p 127
Reception
Her job was to wait below while he climbed the tv antenna tower. Terry cloth shorts bunched between her chubby legs, she kept a lookout for adults, siblings, the school principal who lived next door, anyone with sense enough to call his parents. He would be quick. By his rules of the game, only once up and down constituted a closed case. Then they could retreat to the basement, where they would lie on the couch, âgetting the girlâ his reward for another mystery solved.
READER
Caucasian male, mid-30s, with full beard, wearing black dress pants, blue dress shirt, with sleeves rolled to elbows, and scuffed leather shoes.
The Amazing Adventures of Kavalier and Clay
Michael Chabon
(Picador, 2001)
p 72
Like Mother, Like Son
Mother: Look at your cousin Tess over at the crab dip. Girl looks like she could cry.
Son: Gran choked on a strawberry seed, you know. Sheâs still in the washroom.
Mother: How does someone choke on a strawberry seed?
Son: Exactly. Donât eat strawberries.
Mother: Oh God, look. Tess is going for more dip.
Son: She needs to master the dip. I hear itâs one of the steps.
Mother: No, I think you have to call someone and tell them you love them.
Son: Anyone?
Mother: I really donât understand how Gran can choke on something the size of a seed.
Son: She likes the attention.
Mother: Why is your father standing over by the hedges?
Son: Why is your husband standing over by the hedges?
Mother: Is he smoking? How old is that girl heâs with? Is that your second cousin?
Son: Jocelyn? Janice? Itâs âJâ something. Sheâs really grown up. You should go get your husband.
Mother: You should go get your father. People will talk.
READER
Caucasian female, mid-50s, with blond bob, wearing purple overcoat with poppy, carrying nylon thatched bag bearing a crest of an old leather golf bag.
The Outstretched Shadow:
The Obsidian Trilogy, Book One
Mercedes Lackey and James Mallory
(Tor Books, 2004)
p 76
Glory, Glory
In the church basement, the three young teens took a break from their puppet rehearsal, one song away from calling it a night. Despite the lingering smell of adhesive, one puppetâs moustache had fallen off, and anotherâs hair, brown yarn, required a touch-up.
While the troupeâs leader went up to the chapel for glue, the teensâ minds turned to games, the basement equipped with a basketball court and hockey nets. They rummaged through storage and found gear: gym mats, hockey sticks, hard orange balls.
As he was retreating to the closet in search of a Nerf football, she pulled the pastorâs son close. She wasnât very popular. Her hair was short and greasy. She wore purple velvet knickers, a starched white blouse with frilly collar, and oversized leggings bunched at the ankles. However, the tetracycline had done wonders to her skin, and sheâd always had pretty eyes. He, meanwhile, was a grade younger. The mole on his neck thumped as she leaned against him. His hair was parted firmly down the middle, cut