of new forms as additions to nature — Prose may follow to enlighten but poetry —
Is what I have written prose? The only answer is that form in prose ends with the end of that which is being communicated — If the power to go on falters in the middle of a sentence — that is the end of the sentence — Or if a new phase enters at that point it is only stupidity to go on.
There is no confusion — only difficulties.
XXIII
The veritable night
of wires and stars
the moon is in
the oak tree’s crotch
and sleepers in
the windows cough
athwart the round
and pointed leaves
and insects sting
while on the grass
the whitish moonlight
tearfully
assumes the attitudes
of afternoon —
But it is real
where peaches hang
recalling death’s
long promised symphony
whose tuneful wood
and stringish undergrowth
are ghosts existing
without being
save to come with juice
and pulp to assuage
the hungers which
the night reveals
so that now at last
the truth’s aglow
with devilish peace
forestalling day
which dawns tomorrow
with dreadful reds
the heart to predicate
with mists that loved
the ocean and the fields —
Thus moonlight
is the perfect
human touch
XXIV
The leaves embrace
in the trees
it is a wordless
world
without personality
I do not
seek a path
I am still with
Gipsie lips pressed
to my own —
It is the kiss
of leaves
without being
poison ivy
or nettle, the kiss
of oak leaves —
He who has kissed
a leaf
need look no further —
I ascend
through
a canopy of leaves
and at the same time
I descend
for I do nothing
unusual —
I ride in my car
I think about
prehistoric caves
in the Pyrenees —
the cave of
Les Trois Freres
The nature of the difference between what is termed prose on the one hand and verse on the other is not to be discovered by a study of the metrical characteristics of the words as they occur in juxtaposition. It is ridiculous to say that verse grades off into prose as the rythm becomes less and less pronounced, in fact, that verse differs from prose in that the meter is more pronounced, that the movement ismore impassioned and that rhythmical prose, so called, occupies a middle place between prose and verse.
It is true that verse is likely to be more strongly stressed than what is termed prose, but to say that this is in any way indicative of the difference in nature of the two is surely to make the mistake of arguing from the particular to the general, to the effect that since an object has a certain character that therefore the force which gave it form will always reveal itself in that character.
Of course there is nothing to do but to differentiate prose from verse by the only effective means at hand, the external, surface appearance. But a counter proposal may be made, to wit: that verse is of such a nature that it may appear without metrical stress of any sort and that prose may be strongly stressed — in short that meter has nothing to do with the question whatever.
Of course it may be said that if the difference is felt and is not discoverable to the eye and ear then what about it anyway? Or it may be argued, that since there is according to my proposal no discoverable difference between prose and verse that in all probability none exists and that both are phases of the same thing.
Yet, quite plainly, there is a very marked difference between the two which may arise in the fact of a separate origin for each, each using similar modes for dis-similar purposes; verse falling most commonly into meter but not always, and prose going forward most often without meter but not always.
This at least serves to explain some of the best work I see today and explains some of the most noteworthy failures which I discover. I search for
“
something” in the writing which moves me in a certain way — It offers a suggestion as to why some work of Whitman’s is bad poetry and some, in the same meter is prose.
The practical point would be to
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